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"It's not my fault.

I didn't do this.

Please...

I didn't kill anyone...

I'm not insane!

Please don't make me go in there...

It's scary...

What are you doing to me...?

NO! MAKE IT STOP!

IT HURTS! PLEASE!

Someone help me...

Please...


"Miss Abendroth..."

I heard Doctor Gariten's voice from somewhere in the dark room.
I slowly lifted my head off of the cold floor of my cell, trying to locate the Doctor.
Suddenly the lights flickered on, revealing Doctor Gariten in the doorway.
"Come with me." He motioned with his finger. When I didn't move, he took a few steps closer. "Now now Miss Abendroth... This would be so much easier if you just listened."
He pulled a needle out and stepped closer. I panicked and ran for the door, making it only a few feet out the door before tripping. I screamed when the Doctor appeared behind me, grabbing hold of my hair and dragging me down the hallway. I kicked and howled but it only made his grip tighten.
"NO! STOP! LET ME GO!!!"
Memories flooded back into my mind.
The torture... the experiments... the pain...
Just then I saw someone being taken into a cell by one of the guards. I had never seen him before. I couldn't get a good look at his face, because it was covered by long raven colored hair. I continued to struggle, grabbing his attention. He looked at me for a split second, allowing me to get a look at his face.
It was... frightening...
His eyes were lidless and his skin was beyond pale. But the worst part was his smile...
His cheeks were carved upward. It reminded me of the joker, only this boys smile was cut cleanly. His eyes widened as he noticed me, struggling against the Doctors grip, a curious but puzzled look on his face. Suddenly he was shoved into the cell and I continued to be dragged into the lab.
The doctors assistant was already there, waiting to tie me to the table. His eyes were bright, as if he enjoyed watching the doctor torture me. Kelik was his name.
Kelik took me from the doctor as I struggled.
"Shhh... this will all be over soon..." Doctor Gariten cooed, helping Kelik tie me to the table.
I tugged against the ropes as hard as I could, to no avail.
Doctor Gariten motioned for Kelik to get him a needle and a scalpel.
I thrashed and screamed. The Doctor just chuckled, putting on his surgical mask and stroking the back of his hand against my cheek. I sobbed pitifully.
"No! Please! Someone help me! HELP!!!" I screamed as the Doctor jabbed the needle into my neck, making me go completely limp. 
"We cant have you thrashing about while were trying to work now can we sweetheart?"
He laughed, placing a gloved hand over my mouth to muffle my screaming.

This is it.... This is the end...?



Heres part one to my blood chilling Jeff The Killer x Reader story; ASYLUM.
ENJOY!
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:iconjeffythekiller01:
JEFFYTHEKILLER01 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
Me:I GOT TO SAY  ONE THING TO PUNK ASSES WHO HATE, MOTHERFUCKERS YOU BETTER WATCH WHAT YOU SAY
lyrics from Nightcore-Undead
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SmileBecause Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That avatar Midnight Lick Request is so freakin adorable!!! And this story is freakin awesome too Yuuko Clapping Icon 
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UltimateShadzFangirl Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
OOOOHA YIPPEE I KNEW I WAS ALREADY INSANE BUT COOL IMA GONNA MEET JEFFY WEFFY!
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derpyscourge Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hnnng ur avatar
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justalonelyshadow Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
...stories like this reminds me when i punched and kicked my classmate in 4th grade, there was no teacher and a few students because it was sports week... he was teasing me and i snapped. Almost made a bloody mess..

too bad my crush was there too... -___-;
(NO ONE MESS WITH MY FAMILY)
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sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
yeah!! man i wish i could have seen that XD
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justalonelyshadow Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
XD i was mad and when i sat down trying to calm my self down, i was thinking... "what... why did i even do that??"

Life... is insane..
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sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
that it is
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LittleMissMayhem123 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wait...Waaaa?
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Lugiathekiller Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
When i feel threatened i turn from mild girl to a girl with teeth bared and ready to rip some flesh.
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PhoenixArt2002 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
If anyone ever tries to grab me like that, I go from calm autistic female to biatch from hell in about 2 seconds. I was younger when someone tried to grab me and I bit their hand until it was a bloody mess, I'm a tad dangerous.

Legit ff :3
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Aestas-Hiems Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Insane Insane Insane Insane
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FlutterShy2232 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O.o I am insane?.. Lovely Sanity is Overrated 
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peanutc47 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I already knew i was insane...
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AutisticFanboy Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm pretty sure everyone is insane, not me though *laughs with smug lying grin*
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MitsuKat Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
How the heck did we end up in Insane Asylum? XD Better yet, are we going to DIE?! :o (Eek) ALL WILL BE ANSWERED! :D
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AirSharkSquad Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Awesome!!
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XJumpinJellyBeansX Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Im gonna put each of this story in my favorite ^_^
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Marcysowicked2434 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
The real question is how the fuck did they catch me in the first place lol
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MasterNekoBoy Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*happily and curiously clicks part 2 to this interesting story*
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RainbowNinjaGuardian Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*shudders* Freaking out in an asylum is the worst thing you can do. It can be fun if you run at the padded walls and bounce off, though. And you get out by acting sane as you can. But if you struggle they either bring out the scary needles or the straitjackets that are quite easy to escape. (Don't ask how I know these things, I've never been in an asylum but I know how to get out/have fun just in case.)
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ShadowxScarlet109 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
*sings* THIS IS THE END! THIS IS THE END!
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AnimeMusicLuver Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And that adds ONE more reason to the list of why I HATE doctors... Let alone the doctors office... Or the ER...
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PikachuTina Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
doctors r scary o.o
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XxxHidanaxxX Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ik D:
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Ianasan Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
the doctor reminds me of ayas father from mad father if you ever played
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JEFF-the-shy-killer Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
When will it continue?
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JeffKills Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconyoucame: I LOVE YOUR STORYS EEEEEEEE ~Faints
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kartaegirl Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Student Writer
😧
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waterfall248 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey if u don't mind could you please tell me if u update this?
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JeffxxShampaine Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist
I love your stories. Amazing. =)
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MaxRideSAYWHAT Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
MORE
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janethekiller123 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
part 2 mehhh
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starfirendergirl Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
when is more parts comeing out?
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SLenDErsUMmeRSevE Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You got one part right: blood chilling... :meow: ERMAIGAWSH iz there moawr??
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cutiepie2345 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
:D
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cutiepie2345 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT :d :)
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theawesomeotakuhami Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG. MORE. PLEASE.
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masako12 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
From the beginning it just stund me. When you mention the needle, I was like "Oh no..NO!!" Cuz I'm trypanophobia (or in easy way needle phobia) I wanted to run away from reading your story but I have to let my eye lids open to read it XD and...The story is great :thumbsup:
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preussensunflowers Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O.o same here
never knew it was called Trypanophobia tho...
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masako12 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I searched it in the internet to find a suitable word for it actually XD
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preussensunflowers Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol
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masako12 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol, Ikr?
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Anime-Girl-9011 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student General Artist
This is so cool! I love your creepypasta stories!
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LoveKoreaHetalia1 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I WANT MORE FACELESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
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Psychotic-Love Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
GIVE ME MOREEEEEE :D
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Crimsonheart02 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
More more more more MORE!!!
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Kenziestarblack Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
holy moly more i love it <3 :D
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ShiroIri Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
More! That was awesome!
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