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You froze, registering his repeated words in your mind.
"________?" He asked.

"What...?"

His voice... It sounded too familiar...
Suddenly everything made sense...

Your friend Jack hates his eyes= "Eyeless" Jack
Eyeless Jack knows your nickname= Your Friend Jack
Your friend Jack= Eyeless Jack

"Oh my God... Jack...?" You gasped, sitting up quickly and backing away.


Jack's father was a surgeon... He was mentally insane...
He murdered his wife- and seventeen of his patients...
He used to bring their organs home with him in plastic bags and hide them in Jack's bedroom when he was little.
Eventually this disturbed Jack...
His eyes were identical to his fathers.
When his father committed suicide, he cut out his eyes and had them mailed them to his son in a plastic bag. With it a note reading:

"Just like your Dad."

Ever since then, Jack hated his eyes... Every time he looked in the mirror, all he could see was his fathers dead eyes... staring back at him.

Jack sighed, kneeling beside you and taking you into his arms.
"I'm sorry... Can I have your heart?" He chuckled sheepishly. "Sorry I know that's cheesy."

You had had a huge crush on Jack for a long time now but...
You never knew he felt the same way...

"Jack." You smiled, hugging him back tightly. You noticed that the holes where his eyes were was just part of the mask. You reached up and slowly slid the mask upward, revealing his lips. He didn't object.

"You can have my heart..." You whispered, pulling him into a kiss.

After a while, Jack stood.
"Hey. I got something I gotta take care of. I'll be right back." He said, sliding the mask back down and climbing out of the unlocked window in the dining room.
You sighed contently, heading back up to your bed room and slipping under the covers.
You dozed off after a while but were suddenly awakened by someone breathing near you.

"Shhhhh..... just go to sleep..." A masculine voice hissed playfully.

You then heard a loud thump.

"Ow!! What the hell man?!"

You quickly leaned over and turned on the lamp on your nightstand, you mouth agape.
Tackle fighting on your bedroom floor was Jack and a boy with long black hair and a bloodstained white hoodie, his mouth was carved into a smile,and his skin was pale.

"Get off me bro!" The boy howled. "Can't you see I was in the middle of a kill?!"

"You can't kill her you idiot!" Jack snapped.

"And why the fuck not?!" The boy shot back.

"Because she-"

"UM HELLO?" You screeched. "JACK! COULD YOU PLEASE TELL ME WHAT'S GOING ON!"

Jack and the boy stopped immediately, looking at you.

"Uh..." The boy stammered. "You know this chick?"

Jack face-palmed "Jeff... This is ______..."

The boy looked shocked. "Oops... Sorry bro... I didn't know this was her." He turned to you. "Mah name's Jeff. Genius, Billionaire, Playboy, Philanthropist, Actor, Model, Singer, Dancer, Pokémon Trainer, Ace Attorney. Add me on Snapchat and Instagra- oof!"

"Shut up Jeff." Jack growled, elbowing him in the face.

You ignored that last part and turned to Jack.

"Care to explain what going on here?" You asked.




Heres part 2 of my Eyeless Jack x Reader story
enjoy
I don't own Jack or Jeff
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xXBoomBoxBlueXx Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
LOLJEFF DOE
You should've made him say
Mah names Jeff xD
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MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I changed it to say that xD
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WitheredToyBonnie65 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  New Deviant Student General Artist
um... Jack, how long have you been talking about me?
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xXBoomBoxBlueXx Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
IFKR
JACK
CARE TO TELL ME WHO THIS IS?!
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creepypasta1catgirl Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015
oh meh gawd this this is fabulous you should walk around like this im fabulousKumadori's hair of pure fancynessbecause you're awesome    
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EmotionsLocked Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
Er mah Gurd x3
I LOVE YOU
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ilovelokiandjay Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  Student Artist
did you make part 3 yet?
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Still working on it :)
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ilovelokiandjay Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Student Artist
ok ;) (Wink) 
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purpletabbycat Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOOOOOOL ( GROSS I HATE THAT WORD OR WHAT EVER IT IS BUT ITS THE ONLY THI G I COULD THINK OF .....IM SO SORRY
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Bonnie-Freddy Featured By Owner May 30, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
:3
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kawiikitsune20000 Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
This is awesome! and i love your profile pic it's CUTE!~
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Enderlight1348 Featured By Owner May 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice
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XxBunnyBellexX Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Student Artist
Awesome (*^-^*) I love it is there a part 3?
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SypherCaptor12 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XoD ROFLMAO
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the-luna Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015
more!!!!!!
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Fallen-DemonQueen Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Epic*insert serious face that starts smiling like crazy*
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zeepaarden Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
If there is a part 3 I can die happy.
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MyaBlazeCreepyPasta Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMFG SENPAI HAS MADE MY FAV CP THANK CHU! ;3
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zeepaarden Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Your picture says it all!! XDD
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MyaBlazeCreepyPasta Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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Slendysgirl7 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015   Artist
please make more! :3
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CMW032 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
When's part three
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Monochrome-Aki Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
part 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Student Writer
I can't stop thinking of one of my ex boyfriends and my new one fighting over me it was so damn funny! They were locked together yelling at my house I was all like "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!?" and they were like "I MISS YOU!!!"
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Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Student Writer
Where PART THREE!!!!!!
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felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
LOLZ Is all I have to say
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DrawingAlphaWolf Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Where's Part 3? I can't find it... : (
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hawkgirl3 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Student Writer
*Dreamy eyes* He's so pretty.....
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GreyRoseHalo Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol I can just imagine both guys just freezing in the middle of a wrestle with EXTREMELY funny faces xD
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icequeen159 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yay jeff showed up
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tsuki1993 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Poor Jeff. XD
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deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL JEFF

BRO WTF 

XD
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SmileBecause Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hehee go to sleep, aww Jeffy <3
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Teranovia Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
PLEASEEEEEE PART 2!
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felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
this is part 2 though O_O
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Teranovia Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I mean 3 ^^; sorry
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felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It's ok :D
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thekittengemEmerald Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WHERE'S PART 3?!?!?!?! YO NESSACITO PARTE TRES! Lo siento! I have horrid Spanish!
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mabelxpines13 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Part 3 this is the reason why i love reading, learn more english because im dutch and creepy pasta
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Mirtzu321 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
part 3 please! :3 this is awesome, your one of the best writers i know! 
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ProxyModel Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
interesting
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bloodmoonFANGZ13 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
hahaha
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JackDain18 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
You heard it, part 3.
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TheCreepypastaz Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Student General Artist
part three?
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TheCreepypastaz Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Student General Artist
shit. hes busted.
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AnarchyNeko Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Part 3!!!
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Shadow-Lovers-1000 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Um hello?! Yup something I would say  if I saw that
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zelda806 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
part three?
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