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You finished packing all of your remaining things in your large orange suitcase, making sure that you had everything you needed. You heard a car horn outside. 
"Must be Aunt Kathy..." You muttered to yourself.
You ran downstairs and opened the front door. Aunt Kathy was in her car, her daughter Amberlyn was in the front passenger seat. You ran out to them, putting your suitcase in the trunk and sliding in the back seat.
"Hey ________." Amberlyn and Kathy said at the same time.
"Hi." You forced a smile. This wasn't exactly a celebration...
As Kathy drove down the road, you took one last look at your home. The 'for sale' sign stuck in the lawn. You allowed only one tear to form before you brushed it away and turned on your ipod. This was going to be a four hour drive.
At some point you had drifted off to sleep.

You awoke to someone poking your arm.
"Wake up ________... were here." Amberlyn handed you your suitcase as you sleepily followed them into the house. It was rather large, with glossy wood floors, a tall staircase, a swimming pool, and even a game room with a 56 inch flat screen Tv.
You had remembered visiting here when you were little.
"Amber, show _________ her room." Kathy said, walking into the kitchen.
Amberlyn just nodded and led you up the staircase and down a long hallway. She pointed to the door at the end of the hall. "That's your room."
You opened the door and saw a rather pretty looking bedroom. One wall was grey, and the others were (Favorite Color).
There was a laptop computer on a desk and a printer. You looked to you left and saw a large, soft looking bed with (Favorite Color) sheets.
"Wow.. this room is nice..." You smiled, Putting your suitcase next to the bed. You noticed there was a window next to your bed. You walked over to it and looked out.
In the backyard was... woods?
"That's Evergreen woods..." Amberlyn said. "Nobody goes in there really."
"I see..." You muttered. The woods really were "Evergreen".
"You can unpack now... Tira is making dinner."
"Who's Tira?" You asked, completely unaware of who that was.
"Tira is our housemaid." Amber said as if it were obvious. When she spoke, she sounded like some of her sentences were questions.
Amberlyn left the room, leaving you with your large orange suitcase.
You sat down on your new bed and unzipped it. The first thing you saw was the picture of you, your mom, and dad at (Amusement Park). You were all smiling huge smiles and eating cotton candy.
You were only 10 when this picture was taken.
"Mom... Dad..." You sniffed as tears streamed down your face. It had only been two weeks since they were killed.
You remembered all to vividly the live video on the news. You watched as the plane they were in had crashed, Right at that moment. Aunt Kathy had tried to cover your ears but it was too late, as the news reporter listed all of the names of the passengers... You parents names were on that list...
Now you were forced to live with your Aunt Kathy and Amberlyn.
You placed the photo next to the laptop and continued to unpack.
Quietly you placed your pants, shirts and other clothes in the dresser drawers and put you shoes and dresses in the closet.
After about an hour, You heard Amber's voice on the intercom that was next to the desk.
"Time to eat."
You headed downstairs and into the dining room, Where Amber and Kathy were sitting. You took a seat across form them as Tira put a plate of (Favorite Dinner) in front of you.
"This is.... my favorite..." You smiled, taking a bite.
"That's why we made it. Because we all like it too." Amberlyn smiled.
"So... Both of you will be starting school soon." Kathy said. "Be sure to help her out Amber."
"Got it."
After you finished eating, you asked Kathy if you could take a walk. She said yes.
After grabbing a sweater and slipping on your old black converses, you headed out the front door. You realized that you really didn't get a good look at the area surrounding the house. It was all...
Woods...
The house was surrounded by trees and greenery. It was quite beautiful actually. The nearest house was far from this one, giving the house peaceful isolation and plenty of space. You paused, looking at the dark, ominous woods behind the mansion.

It was almost... calling to you....


Finally its here!!
Ya'll was probably like. "Hurry up already!"
So here it is!
Enjoy.
P.s. Slenderman is not mentioned in this one, this acts as a sort of introduction. Slenderman will show up later. Promise! And so will another surprise guest!
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:icondragongurls:
Dragongurls Featured By Owner Edited Apr 13, 2015
Please tell me the surprise guest is not offenderman
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Lol its not xD
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:iconjinxthekiller14:
JinxTheKiller14 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
....teh....Kathy is one of my aunts heh funny!
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:iconnitorilemon:
NitoriLemon Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really nice~
I love you icon btw :3
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:iconcooldudeofmc:
cooldudeofmc Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
amazing hey is It alright if I say I want you to become the best writer ever?(plz no hate against me)
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
No hate at all! ^_^ thats very motivating
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:iconlittlemisskage:
littlemisskage Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Student Writer
I sent an angel to watch over you last night, but it came back. I asked, "Why?" The angel said, "Angels don't watch over angels." Twenty one angels are IN your world. Ten of them are sleeping, ten are playing, one is reading this message. Send this to ten friends including me. I guess if I don't get it back I'm not one of them. As soon as you get five replies someone you love will quietly surprise you. Please read, not joking. God has seen you struggling with something. God says it's over. A blessing is coming your way. If you believe in God send this message on. Please don't ignore it. You are being tested. God is going to fix two things BIG tonight in your favor. DROP everything and pass it on. Tomorrow will be the best day of your life. Don't break this chain. Send this to 14 friends in 10 minutes. It's not that hard
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:iconxxmidnight-ravenxx:
xXMidnight-RavenXx Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a cousin named Kathy no joke.....
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:icondirtypaws03:
dirtypaws03 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I literally have an aunt named kathy....not even kidding °3°
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:iconkittykathelper:
kittykathelper Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
it's a sign and you and slender will meet and fall in love
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:icondirtypaws03:
dirtypaws03 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well isn't that comforting? -3-
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:iconask-female-firepaw:
ask-female-firepaw Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Student Filmographer
very
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:iconkittykathelper:
kittykathelper Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
yep
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:iconbloodymetalalchmist:
BloodyMetalAlchmist Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ITS A SIGNNN
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:icontherealtwilightspark:
TheREALTwilightSpark Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dun dun DUN!!!!!
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:iconblue730:
blue730 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
Oh my god your icon is adorable! X3
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:iconbleachfanfiction:
bleachfanfiction Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
i like it btw your avatar is very funny
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:iconserenitythedj:
SerenityTheDJ Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Is it weird that 1: I love the color orange and the suitcase turned out to be it?
2:I have a aunt named Kathy that lives in a manor in a forest.

I'm so weird. XD
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:iconmama-julie:
Mama-Julie Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student General Artist
I would call that AWESOME!! *high five*
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:iconserenitythedj:
SerenityTheDJ Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
lol 

*high five*
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:iconultimateshadzfangirl:
UltimateShadzFangirl Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
OMGOMGIMG YAAAAAY!!! LUVIN THIS!
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:iconfluffyshadowpaw:
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
fav color= neon Rainbow
So I have dull and AWESOME
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:iconannabellasirenwaters:
AnnabellasirenWaters Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
YES NEON RAINBOW ALL THE NEON :D
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:iconnaciparaserotaku:
naciparaserotaku Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
JEFF! ITS JEFF RIGHT? OR SPLENDORMAN! xD NOONONONONONO ITS JEFF? =w=
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:iconheroineofalbion:
HeroineOfAlbion Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Favorite color = Grey

JUST SINGLING OUT THAT ONE WALL XD
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:iconmissem111003:
Missem111003 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Fave color: Grass Green. Well that must look AMAZING! *sarcasm*
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:iconserenitythedj:
SerenityTheDJ Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Lol
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:iconlokisservant:
Lokisservant Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww you're Icon is Kawaii~
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:iconlunamoon349:
lunamoon349 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Please add more I <3 live love love it so far!!!!
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:iconfemgreece6916:
FemGreece6916 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
More pwease!!!!
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:iconjackfrostlover4462:
jackfrostlover4462 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
S-S-SUP-SURPRISE GUEST!!!!!
Please not Jeff....... Let it be anyone but Jeff!
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:iconserenitythedj:
SerenityTheDJ Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*Ticci Toby appears*
Toby: Nope! It's just me! *twitch*

(LOL)
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:iconwolfclawwolfwarrior:
WolfClawWolfWarrior Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Oh my god this is SO good ^_^ can't wait to read more!!
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:iconasunamashima:
Asunamashima Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
My name is amber!!! But it's spelt like dis Ambyr lol 
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Iluvjeffdakiller1 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
I have always wanted the name Amber until I liked to look out at the moon so my nick name is Luna. ;D :B :d :p
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asylum-slender-slut Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this story
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:iconghostgirl132:
ghostgirl132 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
OMG my names amber! coolI am a dummy! 
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TinyBirdGames Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think I may have a family member named cathy, not sure cuz I now have more members do to a wedding
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:iconflyinhawaiian33:
flyinhawaiian33 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy crap my aunts name is cathy..........can you tell the future :P
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:iconchibi-rainbow:
Chibi-Rainbow Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student Artist
Aunt Kathy is actually the name of my aunt!!! XDDDD
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KillerBoosBoodLust Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Love it :)
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InfinateSlayr Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Awesome!😋👍
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:iconemi-the-inugami:
Emi-the-InuGami Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol I just got back from a over night camp that everyone at my school gos to every year and we where about to all go out into the neer by woods, it was dusk, I walked out of the cabin, Just to see Slenderman right there ( it was one if my Friends in one of this full body suts ) and it scared the ever livening shit out of me! I jumped in the air and scremed HOLY SHIT and my friend  just fell over laughing  XDXDXDXD LOL
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secretmagics Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
Extreme OMG HOW YOU KNOW MY NAME IS AMBER?!
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Starandtwinkleninjas Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*goes on cleverbot*
User: hey, cleverbot...
Cleverbot: what's wrong?
User: your an idiot
Cleverbot: :O HOW DARE YOU
User: I went on notsocleverbot.com...to check it out...
Cleverbot: do you like scary things?
User: ...?
Cleverbot: do.u.like.scary.things?
User: I GUESS, but...meh
Cleverbot: hfjsnai$373!i
User: um...what?
Cleverbot: IM COMING...
*gets off cleverbot* O.O
iPhone: (on YouTube video) PBG: BEN *computer and iPhone crashed*
Me: BEN!
????: yes~~~?
Me: GOSH DANGIT! It should have been Jeff, or laughing jack
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:iconlostsilverfan1:
Lostsilverfan1 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That has really happened to me well most of it anyway lol...
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:iconstarandtwinkleninjas:
Starandtwinkleninjas Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I forgot wether me or twinkle did that XD
P.s I know like BEN and slendy XDD 
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Malice-the-queen Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
My brother is reading over my shoulder. And my brother is Slenderman. We read all of the story parts. Brother says he is gonna kill you for this. I am sorry for my brother killing you at your house.
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AngelXBEN Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
*see's laptop and cleverbot boots up*

Cleverbot: Hey Princess~

Me: :iconredplz: Lord kill me now.
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