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That damned music...
It made you want to scream. You kept running, but every time you stopped, it would be there. You could only see its eyes, piercing into your very soul. 
Red like fire.

You wanted to die. 

You wanted your brother, 
But he would never come...
He was gone...

"Stay away from me!" 
You would cry, but the unseen creature still pursued you with an undying persistence.

You couldn't move...
You felt a burning pain all over...
Like you were on fire....
Laughter. Discusting, sickening laughter. Screeching noises.
Reaching into your bag you pull out an ocarina.
It was a gift from him... your brother.

He taught you small tunes as a child and convinced your young mind that the songs had magical abilities. You believed him.

Play the song... Play the song!

PLAY IT!

A simple tune, five notes, first three repeated twice, then the first two once, then the last two once, finaly the last note once.

The Song of Healing.

You struggled to blow a puff of air into the fragile instrument, but managed to play the tune nonetheless. 
You could hear a gasping noise from somewhere. Like someone was being struck.

"You shouldn't have done that."

Then came the darkness, flashing lights, a spark catching to your clothes. In seconds your entire body engulfed in flames.
You tried to scream but your breath subsided as the cursed creature laughed and said...

"You've meet with a terrible fate, haven't you?"


"No! Stop!"
You awoke suddenly, screaming from one of your nightmares, listening as the faint remnants of the sickening laughter faded.

It was only a dream.... just a dream...

You looked at the clock on your nightstand and sighed.
"3:23 am...."
Sliding out of bed you entered the bathroom to splash water on your face. You looked at your reflection in the mirror, staring back at you was the same mentally worn out girl you saw every single day. Your eyes were slightly duller than normal, and your hair had lost its luxurious shine from your childhood.

There were a lot of other strange things about you too.

You took a deep breath, mentally preparing yourself for what you were about to do.
You quickly ran back into your bedroom and started up your laptop, which was something you NEVER did, because every time you did, the webpage automatically switched to CleverBot.
And it would keep sending you messages.
You clicked on the internet icon and as you expected, CleverBot loaded up and spoke first. Which was the first sign that this wasn't normal. 

CleverBot: Hello.

You: Who are you, and what do you want?

CleverBot: You already know who I am and what I want _______.

You paused, hands shaking.
It knew your name...
You struggled to type on they keyboard

You: How do you know who I am?

CleverBot: I've known you for a long time... But to be completely honest I wish we could meet in person... don't you think?

You: NO! Stay away from me! I don't want to meet you and I don't want to see you!
EVER!

CleverBot: Then... Don't look behind you.



Here's part 1 of Free Me
I enjoyed writing the cliffhanger part

Disclaimer: I do not own BEN Drowned, creepypasta, or Jadusable

Cover art by Kawacy on DeviantArt
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:iconstupidepeaches:
stupidepeaches Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2016  Student Artisan Crafter
That's like saying " don't blink" some creepy shit
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cadence10034 Featured By Owner May 18, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
"then... dont look behind you"
me: -swiftly looks behind- NO SCREW YOU
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DeaththeKidOCD Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
yup!
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:iconpastelandpsychotic:
Pastelandpsychotic Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Student Digital Artist
SAMe!
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:iconfirefoxflares:
FirefoxFlares Featured By Owner May 3, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I just screamed and died internally when I read that last line. >O<
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RobinSuperhero Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ya know, I would take glass of water from my nightstand and splash him and scream "TAKE A BATH, BEN!"
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stupidepeaches Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2016  Student Artisan Crafter
XD
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DeaththeKidOCD Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
well, if that happened, he would prob try to kill you, in which case, you tell Jeff that BEN said his smile was ugly, and let things go from there. XD
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RobinSuperhero Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YOU.ARE.A.GENIUS.
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:iconcutieplierseye:
Cutieplierseye Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016
That would be fun! But then he'd try to kill you. but just run and grab a knife! easy! (I think)
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:iconrobinsuperhero:
RobinSuperhero Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Probably...Then I would simply give him my Nintendo and we would be friends XD
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:iconcutieplierseye:
Cutieplierseye Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016
True that! Let's go, people!
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:iconrobinsuperhero:
RobinSuperhero Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconbriellababycat123:
briellababycat123 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
U should put a story on quotiv I could help you out
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:iconfnafwriterandartist:
FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016  Student Digital Artist
This is why I sleep with water next to me 😂😂
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:iconballoongirl1987:
BalloonGirl1987 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD same
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:iconfnafwriterandartist:
FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Student Digital Artist
XD
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:iconballoongirl1987:
BalloonGirl1987 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BEN: sup

*splashes water on him*

BEN: AH wtf?!


(Jk,I love BEN)
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:iconfnafwriterandartist:
FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Student Digital Artist
XDDDD
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:iconballoongirl1987:
BalloonGirl1987 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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:iconfnafwriterandartist:
FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Student Digital Artist
XD
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:iconballoongirl1987:
BalloonGirl1987 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Deadpool icon 
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maroonloves Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Hops up from the bed and runs to the nearest lake Ben I'm already fucked up in the mind soooo DON'T BOTHER!!!!!!!
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:iconthescarfytiger:
TheScarfyTiger Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*intently stares at screen*
okay
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:iconclouisery:
Clouisery Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
*sighs* BEN.... I'm already insane, I don't need your help in that department.
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:iconkathrynthehedghog:
KathrynTheHedghog Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*covers my eyes* omg were is the water...???
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DDandYang Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh Shit!
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:icontheresa-maria-falcon:
Theresa-Maria-Falcon Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OH F*CKING GOD DAMNIT *see his arm getting out of my screen* OMFG OMFG WHAT THE HECK !!!????
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Goddammitbro Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015
The reason why my shine is gone is because a hair stylist used the hair drier so much it looked like II crawled up from my grave.
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:icondrakethewolfve:
drakethewolfve Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015  Student General Artist
...scary the 'dont look behind you' part...and yeah CleverBen! XD
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:iconskyandmurray16:
SkyandMurray16 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
That just proves Cleverbot ( BEN I'm sure ) Is behind me...
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:iconangelthewolve:
Angelthewolve Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
* Tirns around slowly* "OH SHIZZZZ!!!!
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SamHedgehog10199 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2015
I read the story, amazing job on it! I loved it! Can you send me a link to the photo you used?
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Nachtnight Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Oh, shieet. Okay I won't.
I will cover my eyes and walk back to my bed and get a beauty sleep. DON'T DISTURB ME IN MY DREAM.
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kittyXD9009 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
OH sh*t
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Ask-Mental-Chipmunk Featured By Owner Edited Sep 22, 2015  Student Digital Artist
If I was in that situation I wouldn't do anything jusstay in bed do nothing with technology and use the toilet once a day and never take bath and get my own mini fridge.

A perfect plan!

oh and lock my door to my bedroom and alway
s hold a weapon

A more perfect plan! 
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Animelover1790 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Roar Scream 
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:iconlolalovelink:
LolaloveLink Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015
SHIT!
I would freak out...
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QueenNevaofarendale Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
FUCK
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:iconkittycatlover356:
KittyCatLover356 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes! This is awesome!
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:iconsteviethepug:
steviethepug Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
WHY THE FU*K WOULD I WANT TO TURN AROUND!!!!! //scared now//
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Bonnie-CPPS Featured By Owner Edited Jul 6, 2015  Student Artist
//Heavy Breathing// OKAY OKAY OKAY!!! I-I'LL M-MEET YOU!!! //Random Nervous I-Don't-Want-To-Die Sobbing **Link to Part 2 plz?**
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AranarvenAngel Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015
*Screams and blitz-attacks with pillow.* NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE!!!!!!!!!! Is there a second part? I really love the story so far!!
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MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
There are 8 parts so far
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:iconaranarvenangel:
AranarvenAngel Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015
As I found out (: This thing is so freakin' awesome! I read the entire thing in one go and now I'm rereading it XD
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
*eyes sparkle* :iconeyesparkleplz:
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:iconaranarvenangel:
AranarvenAngel Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015
*Glomps you*.
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AnonymousKittens Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015
*Whips around, brandishing lapto and smacks him whiff it* STAY BACK PEEEEDOOOO
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lunarrainbow13 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015
hope theres more to this story i :heart: ben drowned he's my fave 
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