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That damned music...
It made you want to scream. You kept running, but every time you stopped, it would be there. You could only see its eyes, piercing into your very soul. 
Red like fire.

You wanted to die. 

You wanted your brother, 
But he would never come...
He was gone...

"Stay away from me!" 
You would cry, but the unseen creature still pursued you with an undying persistence.

You couldn't move...
You felt a burning pain all over...
Like you were on fire....
Laughter. Discusting, sickening laughter. Screeching noises.
Reaching into your bag you pull out an ocarina.
It was a gift from him... your brother.

He taught you small tunes as a child and convinced your young mind that the songs had magical abilities. You believed him.

Play the song... Play the song!

PLAY IT!

A simple tune, five notes, first three repeated twice, then the first two once, then the last two once, finaly the last note once.

The Song of Healing.

You struggled to blow a puff of air into the fragile instrument, but managed to play the tune nonetheless. 
You could hear a gasping noise from somewhere. Like someone was being struck.

"You shouldn't have done that."

Then came the darkness, flashing lights, a spark catching to your clothes. In seconds your entire body engulfed in flames.
You tried to scream but your breath subsided as the cursed creature laughed and said...

"You've meet with a terrible fate, haven't you?"


"No! Stop!"
You awoke suddenly, screaming from one of your nightmares, listening as the faint remnants of the sickening laughter faded.

It was only a dream.... just a dream...

You looked at the clock on your nightstand and sighed.
"3:23 am...."
Sliding out of bed you entered the bathroom to splash water on your face. You looked at your reflection in the mirror, staring back at you was the same mentally worn out girl you saw every single day. Your eyes were slightly duller than normal, and your hair had lost its luxurious shine from your childhood.

There were a lot of other strange things about you too.

You took a deep breath, mentally preparing yourself for what you were about to do.
You quickly ran back into your bedroom and started up your laptop, which was something you NEVER did, because every time you did, the webpage automatically switched to CleverBot.
And it would keep sending you messages.
You clicked on the internet icon and as you expected, CleverBot loaded up and spoke first. Which was the first sign that this wasn't normal. 

CleverBot: Hello.

You: Who are you, and what do you want?

CleverBot: You already know who I am and what I want _______.

You paused, hands shaking.
It knew your name...
You struggled to type on they keyboard

You: How do you know who I am?

CleverBot: I've known you for a long time... But to be completely honest I wish we could meet in person... don't you think?

You: NO! Stay away from me! I don't want to meet you and I don't want to see you!
EVER!

CleverBot: Then... Don't look behind you.



Here's part 1 of Free Me
I enjoyed writing the cliffhanger part

Disclaimer: I do not own BEN Drowned, creepypasta, or Jadusable

Cover art by Kawacy on DeviantArt
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:iconthescarfytiger:
TheScarfyTiger Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
*intently stares at screen*
okay
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Clouisery Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
*sighs* BEN.... I'm already insane, I don't need your help in that department.
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KathrynTheHedghog Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*covers my eyes* omg were is the water...???
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DDisYang Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh Shit!
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:icontheresa-maria-falcon:
Theresa-Maria-Falcon Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Student General Artist
OH F*CKING GOD DAMNIT *see his arm getting out of my screen* OMFG OMFG WHAT THE HECK !!!????
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Goddammitbro Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015  New Deviant
The reason why my shine is gone is because a hair stylist used the hair drier so much it looked like II crawled up from my grave.
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drakethewolfve Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015  Student General Artist
...scary the 'dont look behind you' part...and yeah CleverBen! XD
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MurrayandMangle16 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Student Writer
That just proves Cleverbot ( BEN I'm sure ) Is behind me...
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:iconangelthewolve:
Angelthewolve Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
* Tirns around slowly* "OH SHIZZZZ!!!!
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SamHedgehog10199 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2015
I read the story, amazing job on it! I loved it! Can you send me a link to the photo you used?
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Nachtnight Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Oh, shieet. Okay I won't.
I will cover my eyes and walk back to my bed and get a beauty sleep. DON'T DISTURB ME IN MY DREAM.
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kittyXD9009 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
OH sh*t
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Ask-Mental-Chipmunk Featured By Owner Edited Sep 22, 2015  Student Digital Artist
If I was in that situation I wouldn't do anything jusstay in bed do nothing with technology and use the toilet once a day and never take bath and get my own mini fridge.

A perfect plan!

oh and lock my door to my bedroom and alway
s hold a weapon

A more perfect plan! 
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Animelover1790 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Roar Scream 
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:iconlolalovelink:
LolaloveLink Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015
SHIT!
I would freak out...
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:iconqueennevaofarendale:
QueenNevaofarendale Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
FUCK
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:iconkittycatlover356:
KittyCatLover356 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes! This is awesome!
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:iconsteviethepug:
steviethepug Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
WHY THE FU*K WOULD I WANT TO TURN AROUND!!!!! //scared now//
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Bonnie-CPPS Featured By Owner Edited Jul 6, 2015  Student Artist
//Heavy Breathing// OKAY OKAY OKAY!!! I-I'LL M-MEET YOU!!! //Random Nervous I-Don't-Want-To-Die Sobbing **Link to Part 2 plz?**
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AranarvenAngel Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015
*Screams and blitz-attacks with pillow.* NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE!!!!!!!!!! Is there a second part? I really love the story so far!!
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MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
There are 8 parts so far
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:iconaranarvenangel:
AranarvenAngel Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015
As I found out (: This thing is so freakin' awesome! I read the entire thing in one go and now I'm rereading it XD
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
*eyes sparkle* :iconeyesparkleplz:
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:iconaranarvenangel:
AranarvenAngel Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015
*Glomps you*.
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:iconanonymouskittens:
AnonymousKittens Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015
*Whips around, brandishing lapto and smacks him whiff it* STAY BACK PEEEEDOOOO
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:iconlunarrainbow13:
lunarrainbow13 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015
hope theres more to this story i :heart: ben drowned he's my fave 
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AriaDjDeath Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
um....i'm PREEEEETTTTTY sure everyone who is reading this has Ben as fave.....it's kinda obvious we <3 him...
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Fanfictions112 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: *Looks behind me*

BEN: What did I just tell you...
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bshadow13 Featured By Owner May 31, 2015
Send a link to the next part please
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lpslover1212 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
*grabs knife* stay away!!!
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LookingGlassForbidds Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Please update this! And if that was me I would have tackled him with a hug! Kawaii ^^
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vampnight123 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh shit nah! *throws pillows at BEN* STAY BACK PEDO
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Epicsakura101 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
... Ooooooooooooooooooooooooh shit O_O
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nibbles7192 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015
COMTINUE I NEED THIS AND IF YOU DONT... *laughs* I'll kill you (: 
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MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Part 2-4 are already up
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nibbles7192 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015
Don't mind my previous comment I uh... I had to much candy and I was into the story and *coughs* it was really good... ;~;
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Anonymous-passions Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
CONTINUE THIS

PLEASE

I NEED THIS
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vVvFemBENDrownedvVv Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
''Then... Don't look behind you.''
QwQ ~silent cry~
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Bonnie-CPPS Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Student Artist
lol ikr. I'd be like: The temptation... DONT YOU DARE, BONNIBEL! DONT LOOK!! //Head twists a bit// NO! //Twists head back//
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Scarlet-Skyelash Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015
The temptation... I now seriously am getting the urge to look behind me... (gets hat urge when some one tells her to not look at something) XD
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vVvFemBENDrownedvVv Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
ikr xD
when someone tells u not to do something, you have to xD
always happens to me
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Scarlet-Skyelash Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
Yay! Somebody else with the same problem! XD ... It's really bad when you're high up, have a fear of heights, and are told to not look down.
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vVvFemBENDrownedvVv Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
omg yes O.O that scares me alot
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Scarlet-Skyelash Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
OMG! SOMEBODY ELSE GETS THE FEELING TOO!!!! (glomps you) I ish not alone! XD
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vVvFemBENDrownedvVv Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
xD YEY APH Prussia tackle hug Bro hug 
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Scarlet-Skyelash Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
XD XD XD The first one happens to one of my friends a lot... XD XD XD
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SDRseries Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
If that was me in real life I'd tackle whoever was behind me. XD
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lNekoNekoChanl Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG SUSPENSE UHGHQWFEGJTDVFSCDFRGETHR
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Gogowinter Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Scary I would not have looked behind and just ran forwards :D
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