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That damned music... It made you want to scream. You kept running, but every time you stopped, it would be there. You could only see its eyes, piercing into your very soul. 
You wanted to die. 
You would yell for your brother, 
But he would never come... He was gone... forever. 

"Stay away from me!!"
You would cry, but the unseen creature still pursued you with an undying persistence.
Then...

You couldn't move... You felt a burning pain all over... Like you were on fire....
Laughter. Discusting, sickening laughter. Screeching noises.
Reaching into your bag you pull out an ocarina.
It was a gift from him... your brother.
He taught you small tunes as a child and convinced your young mind that the songs had magical abilities. You believed him.

Play the song... Play the song! PLAY IT!

A simple tune, five notes, first three repeated twice, then the first two once, then the last two once, finaly the last note once.
The Song of Healing.

You struggled to blow a puff of air into the fragile instrument, but managed to play the tune nonetheless. 
You could hear a gasping noise from somewhere. Like someone was being struck.

"You shouldn't have done that."

Then came the darkness, flashing lights, a spark catching to your clothes. In seconds your entire body engulfed in flames.
You tried to scream but your breath subsided as the cursed creature laughed and said...

"You've meet with a terrible fate, haven't you?"


"No!! Leave me alone!!"
You awoke suddenly, screaming from one of your nightmares, listening as the faint remnants of the sickening laughter faded.

It was only a dream.... just a dream...

You looked at the clock on your nightstand and sighed.
"3:23 am...."
Sliding out of bed you entered the bathroom to splash water on your face. You looked at your reflection in the mirror, staring back at you was the same mentally worn out girl you saw every single day. Your (e/c) eyes were slightly duller than normal, and your (h/c) (h/l) hair had lost its luxurious shine. But then you looked closely at the mirror. There was a small crack that wasn't there a few moments ago. You watched in shock as the mirror cracked loudly.

"Not again..." You groaned.

This had happened way too many times before. You didn't know why, but everytime you looked in the mirror at night, it would crack.
Ever since Alex disappeared.
Were you cursed?
You never told anyone about it. Your mom and dad thought that you broke it out of anguish for your brother.
There were twelve large cracks in this mirror.
There were a lot of other strange things about you too.
You took a deep breath, mentally preparing yourself for what you were about to do.
You quickly ran back into your bedroom and started up your laptop, which was something you NEVER did, because every time you did, the webpage automatically switched to CleverBot. And it would keep sending you messages, even asking for Jadusable himself.
You clicked on the internet icon and as you expected, CleverBot loaded up and spoke first. Which was the first sign that this wasn't normal. 

CleverBot: Hello.

You: Who are you, and what do you want?

CleverBot: You already know who I am and what I want _______.

You paused, hands shaking.
It knew your name...
You struggled to type on they keyboard

You: How do you know who I am?

CleverBot: I've known you for a long time... But to be completely honest I wish we could meet in person... don't you think?

You: NO! Stay away from me! I don't want to meet you and I don't want to see you!
EVER!

CleverBot: Then... Don't look behind you.



Here's part 1 of The Hylian
I enjoyed writing the cliffhanger part
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:iconlnekonekochanl:
lNekoNekoChanl Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New member
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG SUSPENSE UHGHQWFEGJTDVFSCDFRGETHR
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:icongogowinter:
Gogowinter Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New member
Scary I would not have looked behind and just ran forwards :D
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
PART 2 HAD BEEN POSTED
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:iconcrishercrosher:
crishercrosher Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
its the "dont look behind you" that scares most people
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:iconchocolatefangirl:
chocolatefangirl Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
o______OOO
I need the next chapter !!!
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:icondaniellasun2001:
Daniellasun2001 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
When will the next one be out?
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:iconeriejaeger2015:
Eriejaeger2015 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
* looks behind her and ACTS terrified* O-O i cant keep a strate face LOLZ
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:iconmistpaw89:
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Student Artist
O-O!!!
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:iconblackbutlergall:
blackbutlergall Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Where...is...THE NEXT PART!!!?
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Just posted
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:iconblackbutlergall:
blackbutlergall Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Thx!!
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:iconxxwhiskdreamxx:
XxWhiskdreamxX Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
I wanna read the next o0o
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Posted! ^_^
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:iconnightfang621:
Nightfang621 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Curiosity is about to kill the cat
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:iconcallofdutylady:
callofdutylady Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Student Photographer
Pwease make moar
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:iconxxticcigamerxx:
xXTicciGamerXx Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
Can you please continue. But take your time.
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I posted pt 2 today
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:iconcheyannekat:
Cheyannekat Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
MORE PWEASE =D =D =D =D lol, im sorry if im bothering you! i just love BEN XD
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:iconbloodmistresskill:
BloodMistressKill Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Student Filmographer
Moar~? :3
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:iconelephantgirl202:
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014
me: Bitch, now I want to look behind me. God damn my curiosity!!!!!!!
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:iconvioletdarkness6:
VioletDarkness6 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014
Oh I agree xD
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:iconelephantgirl202:
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014
*hughfives*
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:iconvioletdarkness6:
VioletDarkness6 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
Curiosity killed the cat xD A shame that I'm goddamn curious too xD
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:iconelephantgirl202:
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
But datisfaction brought it back!!!!
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:iconvioletdarkness6:
VioletDarkness6 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
That's true xDD
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:iconelephantgirl202:
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
OuO
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:iconvioletdarkness6:
VioletDarkness6 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
xDDD
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:iconskull-monster13:
Skull-Monster13 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
Omgf I love it
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:iconkareena08:
Kareena08 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
Wow! This is very interesting! Make a chapter 2!! :D
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:iconlisadrowned:
LisaDrowned Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Student Artist
oh grrrrrr make part 2
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:iconbloodymetalalchmist:
BloodyMetalAlchmist Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Can u give me da link 4 ch 2?
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Part 2 is on my page
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:iconpumpkinpie012:
PumpkinPie012 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014   Digital Artist
Mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeee
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:iconanimeloverleila:
AnimeLoverLeila Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I need moreeee X3 
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:iconasksonictheghost:
AskSonicTheGhost Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014   General Artist
I'd turn around bc let's be honest my life is boring anyway
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:iconmiukumaukuzz:
Miukumaukuzz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
*looks*
OMG BEN WHY ARE YOU ON MY BED???? DD:::
stupid muthafuka ... ;----:
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:iconsophiaofterra:
SophiaofTerra Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MORE!
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:iconsurveycorpsminer:
surveycorpsminer Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NNUUU! I CAN'T FIND THE NEXT CHAPTER!

PLZ I BEG YOU TO LINK ME TO IT!
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Part 2 is on my page
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:iconsurveycorpsminer:
surveycorpsminer Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Knowing fanfictions I'm gonna be dumb and turn around, it's ALWAYS the same thing!!!
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:iconkuro-chan10:
Kuro-chan10 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Keep writing this, please?
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:icondeadlynightshade97:
deadlynightshade97 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
...Ok. *Walks away*
BEN: Oh hell no! Get back here!
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:icon1-anne-the-killer-1:
1-Anne-The-Killer-1 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ben:Hug 
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:icondeadlynightshade97:
deadlynightshade97 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD Let me love you!
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:icon1-anne-the-killer-1:
1-Anne-The-Killer-1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
xD
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:iconshadamy123lovforever:
shadamy123lovforever Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student
big broo nuu :iconnooooplz: lol nothing there
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:icondirtypaws03:
dirtypaws03 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Looks behind me*
Um.....Carl?
(Carl is my cat btw XD not even kidding)
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:iconkreepycick:
KreepyCick Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
*looks behind me* OH SHIT!!!!!!!!! IT'S A DOOR!!!!
Amazing, already. 
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:iconvioletdarkness6:
VioletDarkness6 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014
*looks behind too* OH GOD!!!! IT'S A WALL!!! xD
How can BEN possibly stand there? xD
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:icontrueventuriangirl:
TrueVenturianGirl Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Artist
*looks behind me*NAAAAAOOOO I WANT TO SEE BENNY!!;~; HES NOT THERE!!;~;
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