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  You checked the calender above your bed, drawing a star on the 11th of September, Your birthday. Only a few days to go. 

No school today because it was Labor day weekend. 
Getting out of bed you went straight to the shower, then got dressed in a soft black tank top, (f/c) cardigan sweater and black skinny jeans. Heading downstairs and into the kitche you listened for your mother who would usually be in the kitchen cooking breakfast by now. But you heard nothing.
               "Mom?" You called.
No response.
She was probably at her friend Celeste's house watching boring musicals from the 70's and drinking tea.
You sighed and opened the cabinet, pulling out a box of Lucky Charms.
Thats when you noticed the note on the refrigerator. You pulled if off and read:


You folded up the note, placed it on the counter, and checked the clock on the microwave. 
It was already 2:36 pm.

Grabbing the milk carton out of the fridge you had a bowl of cereal before heading back upstairs.
You brushed out your hair and put on silver rose shaped earrings.
Running downstairs you put the keys in your cardigan pocket, slipped on your grey Vans, and went out the door.

Since the park was only two blocks away, you took your time and enjoyed walking down the shady side of the street.

But then you suddenly got the feeling that someone was watching you.

You paused, looked behind you, and saw nothing. 

Shaking the feeling off as simple paranoia you continued walking towards the park.
Reaching into your cardigan pocket you pulled out your Ipod and earbuds. 
You put them on and listened to (Favorite song), drowning out the world. 

Finally you arrived at the park, but you couldn't find your mom or Celeste anywhere, so you kept walking, noticing that on one end of the park there was nothing but dark woods. 
A few kids ran around your feet and one little girl with curly brown hair and a pink dress dropped her teddy bear. It landed right in front of you.
You took out your earbuds, picked it up, and dusted it off, handing it to her.
The small child hugged the bear to her chest and smiled.
"Thank you." She said in a gentle voice.
"No problem kiddo." You winked playfully.
The girl turned to go but then stared at you curiously.

"You're very pretty Miss."

The compliment took you by surprise but you smiled gratefully.
"Aw! Thats very nice of you! Say whats your name?"
"It's Sa- ... oh. I have to go. See ya!" The girl cut herself off, turning and running down the path until you couldnt see her anymore.

"That was weird. But she's adorable." You said quietly to yourself, continuing in the opposite direction. 

On your way you stopped to look at a beautiful hedge of rose bushes with vibrant red flowers growing from it. You picked one and sniffed it. 

                   "It's beautiful isn't it?" You heard a male voice say from behind you.

"Yeah it's-"
You spun around but saw no one. 

Confused you shrugged it off, picked the thorns off the rose, shortened the stem and placed it delicately in your hair, careful not to break any of the soft petals off.
You relaxed to the sounds of birds chirping and leaves rustling on the trees and continued to walk,
You regretted dropping your cellphone in a puddle so you could contact your mom.
Approaching a wooden bench you sat down, flinching when you felt someone standing behind you. You spun around and saw someone waking away.
The person had long black hair that fell past their shoulders and was wearing a white hoodie and black jeans.
You had to get to the bottom of this.  
"Hey! Are you following me?" you called. But the person only started running.
You quickly got to your feet and ran after the person. Keeping only close enough to see where they were going. The person ran into the woods that were behind the park and you followed at a distance.
"Wait!" You called after them. Because of the high trees and think leaves the area was very dark.
You brushed past tall shrubs and plants trying to keep up with the stranger.
                   "Hello?" You called, instantly regretting it when the person stopped and turned around. You stopped in your tracks and came face to face with the most frightening person you'd ever seen... Unfortunately it looked all to familiar. It was a boy, about your age, His skin was pale, His eyes were lidless, making them abnormally large, with dark rings around them like heavy eyeliner. But what made you scream wasn't any of that. It was his smile. He had a unnaturally wide smile carved into his cheeks, like a Chelsea grin.
You turned to run, but he was too quick. He pushed you to the ground and held you there.

"Huh. I guess my plan worked. You're easier to lure than I thought."

You let out a screech and he covered your mouth with his hand.
"Shhhhh... sweetheart we don't want anybody hearing that pretty little scream of yours now do we?"

His face was uncomfortably close to yours. You felt your heart rate speeding up as the boy laughed, an insane look in his eyes. You tried to get away but his grip was too strong.

"If I uncover your mouth, you wont scream right?" He asked. The tone in his voice gave you chills.
Hot tears ran down your cheeks as you nodded and managed to calm down a little.
The boy snickered and let go of your mouth, watching you curiously as you gasped for more air.
    "Please... please don't kill me... I'm begging you. I don't wanna die." You whimpered.

 You saw the boys eyes lose the insane edge they once had. He sighed, wiping away a tear from your face. 

The heck just happened?

You flinched but continued to struggle a bit.
 "If I was going to kill you trust me I would have done it by now..." He said in a low voice. He looked at you curiously. "You're even prettier up close."
You felt yourself blush slightly.

Everyone was calling you pretty today! Weren't you special!

He stood up and pulled you to your feet, yoi staggered awkwardly into his chast before backing away quickly, face red.
You shivered, remembering his smile from a scary article that your friend Alicia made you read;

... Jeff The Killer...

                "By the look on your face you probably know who I am dont you?"
 The boy asked. You took a step back when he pulled out a razor sharp, bloodstained knife and twirled it around his fingers skillfully. He looked up at you and grinned, obviously amused by your extreme discomfort.

This couldn't be real... It couldn't be.

"You're...." You could hardly speak from the shock of everything, still unable to fully register who was in front of you, in flesh and blood.

He's real.

"You're.....Jeff the.. the k-"
Your vision began to shift, the floor started to spin.
You started to fall to your knees before Jeff quickly reached for you and held you in his arms. He looked genuinely concerned.

Killer...? Genuinely concerned...? What...?

Nothing made sense.
You looked up at him, to your surprise too weak and shocked to shove him away.
"Please d-dont..." You whimpered.
He frowned a bit. If that was even possible.
"I wont hurt you." He said.

There it goes. Fear. Out the window. Nothing but curiosity and bewilderment. 

"I don't understand...."

              "I've been watching you _______... for a long time now." He said softly.
         "Why? What do you want from me? You asked.
Jeff smirked and gazed into your eyes with such intensity you would have thought he was staring straight into your soul.
                 He paused before speaking.  "Because... I'm in love with you __________.

                              And I want you to love me."
I wrote a Jeff The Killer x Reader Fanfic for all you Jeff Fans! (i do not own Jeff the Killer)
Tell Me what you think!
Enjoy :3
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Dustfinger1 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Writer
Imma gonna go to sleep now. Take his advice, I'll go to sleep
KillDreamEata Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
my birthday is one day before that! OMG. THATS SO CREEPY!
meridafair12 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
My birthday is September 12th!!!! How lucky am I?
Anonymous-passions Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
my birthday is less than a week after that... .___.
potatofingers Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  New member Student Artist
Not kidding September 11 is actually my real birth day.....creepy O_o
meridafair12 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
My birthday is the day after yours!!!! That is soooo frecky!!!!
xLoveJeffx Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
I freakin love this! *Free Icon/Emote* Molang (I Love It!) 
hatsunemiku1245 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Hey Can I have a ak-47 in this story?/
chals099 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Am I the only one that noticed it said "like a Chelsea grin" that creeped me out meaning how my name Chelsea and is spelt the same way O.o
shadazefan54563534 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
jennyorlean Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My hair's too short for ponytail too xD
jennyorlean Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol 10 days off my real birthday x3 minss the 21st
jennyorlean Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Winter-Wolf-Art Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How do you put up deviations like this? I have not been able to figure it out... xD I am curious
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
While logged in you have to open writer on another tab, then after your done writing theres an option to post to deviantArt
Winter-Wolf-Art Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you
Victoria0502 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014
Oh my god I love it and if Jeff were too come here and say he loves me I will probably just glop him and say I also love him:) yeah I know I'm crazy but hey everyone can be crazy form time to time no?
JordanDonges Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist reaction to if jeff the killer said he loved me i would be shocked confused then i would accept him prob cause i got a crush on him ((yes i know i am a fucking psychopath cause i love a murderer))
Dragonfear14 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh no you're not a psycho i like eyeless jack...... yeah... i like a cannibal. are not a psycho, i am.
JordanDonges Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think about ripping peoples organs out i am a psycho sweetie
Dragonfear14 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmmm... NOPE! I think about killing people in teh brutalest way possible. .. im psycho.
JordanDonges Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sweetie you don't need to be cannibal to be psycho
Dragonfear14 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
JordanDonges Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
a psycho is someone whose not right of mind.....and im a killer~
Dragonfear14 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really are you really a killer?
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futuremrspayne Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014
Crying because my birthday actually is the 11th of september
capriciousHussie Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Queen-of-DarkAngels Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014
i love it sooo much! 
oh and im new here in deviantart and i was wondering how can you make a story here?
RejectedAngel903 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Its awesome :)
May-Hana Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
Omg my birthday on the 11th of September!!! XD
RejectedAngel903 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Maybe you'll get a visit....MUAHAHAHA!
DJDiamond Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Student Artist
I love you midnightrainbowfire!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
AsheRider Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
im reading this being like, Just kiss! , and of course nothing happens. and jeff just looks like thisBonniButt Emoticon Mirai Flustered Icon 
Carlli2000 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Student Artist
My birthday is on September 11th! *squeals*
JadeCelineCruz Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Student Artist
My birth day is on September 11! 8D
Cupcakethepikachu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG. MY BIRTHDAY IS ON SEPTEMBER 14TH xD but good story o3o 
slendermangurl Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Me:(laughs so hard)
Slendy:(pissed as fuck)
Crimsonpikachumanga Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014   General Artist
Awesome!! ^_^
Jeffythekiller123 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
So close to my birthday. My birthday is September 15. Not September 11. Damn. So close!!
Cupcake-eatr Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
Lolol mine is September 13
Coincidence? I don't think so...
JinxTheKiller14 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
Lol mine is September 14
Missem111003 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I have a friend who made me read creepypasta, and that is what got me into it. And her name is ALICIA! This is my life= CONFIRMED!
Angel3321G Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
ohhhh thats so cute #3# really good!
nova12356 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
It wsd awesome can't wait to read the other one😄
MermaidNami Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Excuse my language but HOLY SHIT IM READING THIS AND MY BIRTHDAY REALLY IS SEPTEMBER 11TH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry just had to say this is creepy c: But still a good story anyways
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hurhurhur I'm watching you~ xD
xXTheSirenXx Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Omgee!!! Your icon is adorable >u<
MermaidNami Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
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