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"C'mon Tim, you have to come along!"
You pouted poking your friend in the arm repeatedly, which was something he hated.

"Stop it _______, I'm not doing it." He frowned and pushed your hands away.
"It's unnecessarily dangerous."

"What's so scary about Rosswood Park huh?" You asked turning serious.
"Everyone I mention it, you get all upset."

He looked at you and shook his head.
"Why do you even want to go?"

"Because! I like exploring the woods. Plus we could bring my camera and see if we can make some scary footage. Please?" You begged, making the best puppy face you could.

Tim pinched the bridge of his nose and sighed.
"Fine, but if Alex shows up we leave. I don't like that guy."

"What's wrong with Alex? Hes the one who needs our help to finish his movie."

Alex Kralie was an old friend from high school who had wanted to create a movie called "Marble Hornets".
You and Tim had auditioned years ago but he discontinued making it and started acting weird. His friend Jay had decided to finish the movie and wanted you to film with a video camera regularly.
Until he told you about strange occurrences in Rosswood Park, you had thought it was just for fun, but Jay explained that there were strange people in the park, one being tall with no face and wearing a suit and tie, one having a hoodie on and a mask with a red face painted on it, and a man in mask.
You thought of it only as some college kids playing pranks, but still wanted to find out for sure.
You regularly hung out with your friend Tim, who was a close friend of yours, you had recorded music together on several occasions because his bedroom was full of keyboards and other musical instruments. 
Tim was a mysterious man, with a slightly husky build, and a reoccurring chronic cough, probably from the smoking.
He had a gentle, but masculine voice and liked being alone most of the time except for when he was around you and your friend Brian..
You didn't want to admit it, but you had slowly developed feelingd for him, which you were pretty sure he didn't return.
He was pretty cute, and had a soft spot for you, and cheesecake.

~The next day~

"So why are we here exactly?"
Tim asked, crunching on the dead leaves underneath his brown shoes. It was bright outside and sunlight beams made the green foliage look fairytale-like.

"To film this abandoned house that Jay told me about." You responded, opening the broken front door and stepping inside. The paint on the walls was peeling and trash littered the floor.
Tim looked around eyeing the house suspiciously.
Without him looking, you slipped away quickly and grabbed your flashlight, heading down a set of stairs into a basement.
You heard Tim call for you but kept quiet hoping to catch him scared.
You shined your flashlight around, not spotting anything in particular until your camera began to static.

"What the...?" You muttered, hitting the camera on your palm to clear the screen.
You could hear Tim upstairs, having another one of his coughing fits.
He called for you again and you yelled back to him.
You heard his footsteps coming down the stair when your flashlight beam landed on a tall creature wearing a suit with no facial features. 
You screamed and dropped your camera. As you felt static in your ears and fell to the floor, completely numb.
Tim yelled you name and ran to your side, skiing you and begging you to get up.
He staggered and started coughing up blood, stepping towards the creature.
He said something incoherent and fell to his knees. You wanted to reach for him, but you just shuddered as he collapsed to the floor, coughing and shaking.

Then everything went black.




Finally heres part 1 of The Proxy!
I made it xtra long for yall!
Enjoy!
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:iconthekawaiidemoness:
thekawaiidemoness Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing *0* is there gonna be anymore chapters?
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:iconmidnightrainbowfire:
MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Yes there will be more chapters
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:iconthekawaiidemoness:
thekawaiidemoness Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay cx cant wait its so good *0*
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LinkFan15 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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XxWhiskdreamxX Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
Part two please c: your such a great writer
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GreyRoseHalo Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Ohmygosh! Please do the Part2!
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CreepypastaNerd5645 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Writer
Part 2 pretty pls 😊
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amber14703 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wheres part 2 or if there isnt one when MIGHT it be uploaded?


BTW i LOVE your work your a  true genius
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torikakuzuhidan Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I love your icon! So cute! I would have woke Tim up by saying: "Hoodie ate ALL your cheesecake."  
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VioletDarkness6 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
That Icon is really great xD Everytime I see it I have to laugh xD

What an awesome idea to wake him up *_* Let's try! Akari Akazaki (Good Job) [V3] (Once we wake up by ourselves) xD
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:iconbarrel2s1cool:
Barrel2s1cool Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I will tug him.
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:iconsaline2002:
saline2002 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
Can i get a air horn to wake tim up like i do my brother
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:iconfluffyshadowpaw:
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: *makes sad puppy eyes* But... my friend at schools name is Alex. He would NEVAR hurt anyone.
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amber14703 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Alex walks up to you like waddup bitch with a gun*




XD sorry just felt like commenting that no harsh feelings tho
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Ayeni-chan Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Photographer
....
Excuse me, but did you used Google Traduction?
Because THIS is not French at all x3 In fact, this doesn't mean anything. (Sorry about my English...French people are not so good with languages x<)
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:iconthe-grand-highblood1:
The-Grand-Highblood1 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student General Artist
It's very hard to wake me up. In other words I sleep like My friend Tim here.
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:iconnerdynishz:
nerdynishz Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
alex you fucking faggot fuck!
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:iconstealthelf:
StealthElf Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I nominate you for Best Fucking Insult Ever! (No sarcasm intended)
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meowmeowmeowmeow4164 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Artist
fgt

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:iconmercythefox:
MercyTheFox Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Photographer
I swear to god the day Alex dies will be the day I get a heart. Oh wait no, I'd still just sit there laughing like a mad man while my dad wondering if I should start going back to my Therapist again. =3=


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OneHellOfAButler666 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
That's gonna be me alright! XD
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:iconthe-grand-highblood1:
The-Grand-Highblood1 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student General Artist
Same. ^-^
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blazequakes Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Writer
Alex your death was fortold nobody touches my friends/colegs
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:iconniky-wildthunder:
Niky-WildThunder Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You touch him and youll pray for hell, alex!!!
*hides Timmy behind my back*
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ShadowMonster1111 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I WILL SAVE HIM!. 
First Emote   
With my amazing vampire powers!
Vampire GIF smiley test
 
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Lovegrave9619 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
Please i want more...this is awsome.
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RainbowQuack Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
please ignore my earlier comment about not knowing where part 1 was. i have found it (obviously) and i LUVS IT!
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Chaosgirl631 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol this is great, but my name is Alex!Lol!!XD
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:iconvioletthekiller:
VioletTheKiller Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
I really really want to read more of this!

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Susupola Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
HURT MY MASKY AND I WILL GO DEMON BUTLER ON YA! *Rides on Sebastian Michaelis armed with silverware* CHAAAAAAAARGEEEE!!! *Leads army which consists of Disney characters, Elfen lied characters, Black butler characters, Hayate no gotoku characters, Dreamworls characters, and Rebbeca black*
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ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Shit just got real up in here!

I shall join! -piggy back rides Grell who is armed with his chainsaw and i have an axe-
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Susupola Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sebastian: Oh dear God. Hello Grell.
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:iconresidentevilhetalia:
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student General Artist
Grell: Hello, Sebby! -glomp-
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:iconsusupola:
Susupola Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sebby: *Throws Grell into a nuclear Powerplant* Now that's done.. 
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:iconresidentevilhetalia:
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student General Artist
He was my ride!
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amber14703 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
randomly appears out of nowhere hey guys..
i will come back later
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:iconsusupola:
Susupola Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's a Sebby instinct! Plus, Grell-kun is IMMORTAL!

Sebby: Go ride a pissed off Ciel... Or Rebecca Black. Oh wait, I think Grell's waking up.
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ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Ok
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Kokoapurr Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sh*t just got real...apparently.
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:iconmercythefox:
MercyTheFox Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Photographer
Don't forget the Titans! :D
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Susupola Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My god, yes!
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Lovegrave9619 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
Oh snap!
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seerofheros Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
*beep*! Touch masky I WILL go 2p on yo *beep*
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Mamamia1005 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MOAR! D: Pwease...? :iconbegplz:
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FlutterShy2232 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OMFG! I'M GONNA KILL THAT SON OF A :censored:  HE IS GONNA :censored: PAY!! :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: :censored: ... Well.. that escalated quickly 
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WeptMountain Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
If you could tell me or something when there's another part that would be great ;A;
I've never wanted another part of a story so bad, this is amazing.
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WeptMountain Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
Wait wait wait wait. *digs through everywhere* THERE HAS TO BE MORE.
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PsychoHichi815 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i do like the story alot i am a bit confused though so far. and just wanted to ask why you made Tim's eyes blue when they are a greenish brown/ hazel color
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Stripedclaw Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
ALDJALKDAS I just started watching Marble Hornets today, after going through 39 entries so far I think Alex is a douche.
This just multiplied it XD
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katie-killer-sparkle Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I'm gonna kill that little :iconcensoredplz: !!!!!!0
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