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"This is my fault." He whispered.

The bullet had just missed your heart, but the blood pouring on the ground meant a dead end for you.
You didn't know where the nearest hospital was. Heck you didnt even know where you were. By the time you got there you would die from blood loss.

The shock from the wound began turning to pain.
But this was for the best right?
It's what you had asked for.

"BEN its okay... at least you stopped. I didn't want you to do anything you'd regret. Here-"

You touched your wound and blood smeared or your fingers. You held it up to him.

"Now you can be free."

BEN expression hardened. He pushed your hand away.

"Dont be stupid _____. Theres no way I can accept that; not after what I've done to you."

Your heart sank. 
What was he saying?

"But... you..."

You didn't understand. This would make him free.
It's what he always wanted.

"I don't need it anymore. It's not important. Listen-"

"No, you listen." You said quickly. "Shut up and listen to me. I loved that boy from all those years ago and I still do.  I loved his stupid face, and the way he smiled at me, and the way he said my name. That will never change. You are Ben and I love you. I love you, you idiot..."

"______." BEN whispered.  

"You're-..."

You could no longer speak.
Your vision finally faded. And your world slipped into darkness.




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BEN's P.O.V.

Her eyes fluttered shut and her hand fell.

She couldn't be dead...
She couldn't be...

"______." I shook her arm. "Hey..."

No response. 

I listened to her chest. 

No breathing.

I checked her pulse.

No heartbeat.

I felt my heart sink in my chest.
My hands shook.
This was my fault.

This was all my fault....

"No..._____ please don't leave me." I gasped, pulling her cold body closer to mine.

Without her, there was nothing left.
No one else left who cared about me...

I loved her.

I shouldn't have waited until it was too late.
I waited until it was too late to tell her I love her.
And now, no matter how loud I shout and cry...

She'll never hear me.

I didn't expect her to return the feelings.
I was the monster who subjected her to years of misery.
Her brother was right.
I was an abomination, who should have died in that lake.

But yet she said those words.

It begins to rain.

I stand, with ______ cradled in my arms, carrying her back inside the warehouse.
Then I hear a delicate clink behind me, like glass.
I turn and spot my ocarina on the floor.
It must have fallen out of my pocket when I stood.

Heal her...

A voice in my head whispers to me.

You can still help her...

I look down at _____. Then back at the instrument.

Then it hits me.

The song.

I place her gently on the ground before turning to the ocarina. I reach down and pick it up, grazing my fingers over the shiny blue gloss.

I knew what I had to do.
It was so simple.

I kneel down next to ______'s body, planting a chaste kiss on her forehead.

This is the way it should be.
Love is sacrifice...

 
My life for hers.

Hey there guys! Ready for even more angst and feels?
No? Okay!
Well... here it is anyway!

Sorry if its a little dark and emotional.
But hey sacrifice is the greatest love right?

Disclaimer: I do not own BEN Drowned, Jadusable, or Creepypasta.

Cover art by Kawacy on DeviantArt 
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:iconralathekira:
Ralathekira Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2018  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh is that REALLY HOW THE SONG OF HEALING WORKS.
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TheMoonlitTitan Featured By Owner Edited Jan 14, 2018  Student
BEN No! Listen, I don't care if I die, just, please....... Don't sacrifice yourself......... I'm not worth the life that you deserve to have.........  
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MzurixImane Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T YOU DO IT BEN!!!!!!!!! DON'T GIVE YOUR LIFE FOR MINE!!!!!!!!! I'LL SMACK YOU WITH MY FRYING PAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

BEN Drowned (smiles sadly and hands me the frying pan): It'll be worth it...
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callmetrin Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
😂😂😢😢😢😥😥😥😱😱😰😰😰 waaaaah
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DarkPuffArcher Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
iF YOU LOVE ME LET ME GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Pretty-Physco Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017
me in bens head : DONT DO IT BEN YOULL FIND SOMEONE ELSE
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:iconneonwolf15:
neonwolf15 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017
"If you love, you live!" - King of Intherstia from Fran Bow
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:iconlulana13:
Lulana13 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2017
yeeeeeeeeeeees!
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kit123abc Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol everyone's crying in the comments and im over here laughing my ass off like "OH SHEEEIT HE AIN'T DYIN SON!"
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CatSmore Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016  Student General Artist
FEELSDanisnotonfire: FEELS feels feels feels 
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:iconphantomhivebunny:
Phantomhivebunny Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2016
awwwwwwwwwwwww
I am gonna cry!!!!!!!!!!
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Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
*suddently sits up* *pulls out bullet* Faking it, faking it!! *pulls open shirt to reveal cream puffs* Okay my shirt is like filled with cream puffs!!
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:iconlulana13:
Lulana13 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2017
hmm, isn't that a reference from something?
or is it just me?
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:iconcomedywiz411:
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Adventure Time gender bend episode (Bad Little Boy) :3
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:iconlulana13:
Lulana13 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2017
yes!
knew i recognized it!
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:iconstarry-purplekraft:
Starry-Purplekraft Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
OH SHIT HERE COMES THE ROMEO/JULIET
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Pikachu0123 Featured By Owner May 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
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Cutieplierseye Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016
NO YOU DUMB BUTT!! DONT THINK ABOUT IT, well you have, BUT DONT DO IT, BENNY!!! DONT...PLEASE DONT!!!
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Izdasilverwolf Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2016
nonononononononononononononono!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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avatarlover2 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2016
*silently glaring at this kid named Alex in my class*
*thinking* wHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU DO THAT U ASS fuk u bitch



He doesn't even have a phone
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TicciTwilli Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2016
wAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT WHAT! NO BEN DONT DO IT HOE DONT DO IT
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BallisticBri Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
NO FUCK NO I CANT CRY FUCK
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Leafiny Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Uh oh, i think i read the right kind of the fan-fiction
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GAH THE FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS!!!!! SpongeBob (Cries) 
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Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
He's going to die for me.......that's a first, but everything has to start somewhere.
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Theresa-Maria-Falcon Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*WAKE UP SUDDENLY* NO BEN DON'T DO THAT !!!! *JUMP ON HIM*
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staryice Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015
NO NO NO!!!
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:iconmadiroma:
MadiRoMa Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
THE FEELS!!! BEN baby don't do it I rather you to live!
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Koolpuppy101 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i'm crying! now in my tears
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RoxyHeal Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015
BEN if you do that, I will MURDER you :(
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Nameless2014 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Already done.
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Madanastia Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015  Student General Artist
Nooooooooooooooooo ben
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WyvernHuntress Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015
NUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Ben why?? ;w;
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kyshan-suzuki Featured By Owner Edited Oct 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nooo Ben I rather you be alive(alive in a way?) Then reader the feels are hitting me hard I'm really feeling it. ;;;~;;;
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TheShadowMuffin Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is going to turn into one of those romeo and Juliet scenes isn't it?
:3
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Llama-Bean Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow........ thats fucking depressing and goes against everything I learned ... but YOLO!
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AbbyFireForLife Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Ben, no, dont you fucking dare, just no
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